by ¤©h€€®ƒüll¥♥©¥ñ!c@l¤ Dec 25, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
You bring my hand to yours |
by Raven Lynn
wow thats awesome...well I wish your grandmother the best of luck in getting better!! |
once again you amaze me with your talent. don't ever quite. you might miss something important. |
Wow this was just amzing..So strong..So awesome..I luv it soo so much..Please continue to write..this poem shows that u have so much talent to share:o) Excellent writting, Two thumbs up! |
That was fantastic. You are an incredible writer, and this poem deserves to win the next poetry contest. your rhyming was perfect, the poem was perfect. i think im gonna print it out to put on my wall |
by pinkalias
I like that you wrote a piece dedicated to such an emotionally distorting subject. I also like the message that you sent across, beautiful way to put your pain into words while giving others hope to redeem before it's too late. Well done |