o its not really true, its just shes really sick and stuff so i wrote it as if she were to die

that was a great poem keep up the good work 1 i am going to read more

Its so sad!! A wonderful poem tho!!! Loved it!

awesome, but so sad... very nicely written, great work!

thAts so sad, i could cry im sorry for wat u went thur gr8 poem
luv rach

I like that you wrote a piece dedicated to such an emotionally distorting subject. I also like the message that you sent across, beautiful way to put your pain into words while giving others hope to redeem before it's too late. Well done

That was fantastic. You are an incredible writer, and this poem deserves to win the next poetry contest. your rhyming was perfect, the poem was perfect. i think im gonna print it out to put on my wall

im adding you to my favourates, also.

and just btw, i was actually drawn to this poem by your name ... it's a great one! x x x x

Wow this was just amzing..So strong..So awesome..I luv it soo so much..Please continue to write..this poem shows that u have so much talent to share:o) Excellent writting, Two thumbs up!
Shannon

once again you amaze me with your talent. don't ever quite. you might miss something important.

wow thats awesome...well I wish your grandmother the best of luck in getting better!!

xoxo