i don't know who gave you a 3, but this is most definatly a 5. thanks fpr commentingon mine,it's greatly appreciated. thanks again and take care! =]
-Cheerfully Cynical

a very well written poem to which many can relate, including me. another 5/5, most definatly.

I'm left to speak for myself
You have one to help you defend
You plus her makes two, that enough
So leave me out, 'cuz i make three

^ i love that part especially. as always, keep it up!
take care,
-Cheerfully Cynical

hehe i went to go vote, and it said I already did, and then i noticed I already read/commented/voted on this poem on the 25th. *scratches head* i didn't remember that!

hahaha that's funny, thanks anyways

this one's cool...good job....HAPPY NEW YEAR And thanks for reading my poem.....tale care....

oops....i meant take care....sorry for that error!!

Really touching. Is it true? If so, I'm sorry. You did a great job with the wording, by the way. Totally awesome.