cool poem well written tough subject but beautiful poem

that was really kool. people wear them hear to. i guess they do every where. i never wanted one till i read your poem! thank bunches!

thanks for all the comments guys! now i'm trying to figure out what to put instead of those 2 lines and i'm off to check out some of yours!
-Cheerfully Cynical

=] i fixed it! does that sound more scientifically correct?

Great poem. Nothing is amiss. I think those livestrong things are sad. And I think it is terrible that there is a kind for people who are totally against it. If I still was a teen, I would probably wear one.. Keep up the good work, never quit. 5/5

Omg that poem was beautiful and touching and sad. You did a really good job conveying the emotions and the sadness and confusion. Cancer is tough and you really do have to stay strong. Keep writin i'm liking what i'm reading.
*Stay Strong*
-Incognito

Awwww... this poem was really sad, but I loved it:) Excellent work! Girl you have a gift! God Bless your heart! And I hope you tell me if there's any new poems, cuz I'd like to read them:p.. *5/5*..

~!~Sweet Angel Bliss ... Sedusha~!~

I really like this poem!!! its awesome!!! I have one of those livestrong bracelets. I never take it off. 5/5 once again!

wow. i'm really impressed. very nicely done. i applaud you.