ahhh Allen, you're back!! I missed your work fairy godfather! ths poem was beautiful, wasnt abe to recall the message but I have a fair idea. The words you used were awesome. I dunno why but it had a kind of olden-day feel to it. wait ino. its about dying love....ahhh imlost. good stuff though...love dies hard? hmm

:) Thanks Alysse :) It is about dying love :) dying "secret" love... kind of what I was going through in the past month.. and the reason why I haven't been writing... but yea :) nice to see you again.

wow... i loved the picture you painted in my mind as well the metaphors. dying love huh? sad...*sigh* well, glad you're back and hope you're doing better. happy christmas/holidays. take care, allen:)

awsome poem.great job.great metaphors=)

hey..its been a while since u posted a poem....this one was beautiful....nice metaphor!
:-)

This is just awesome, the way it was written, its just flows so well..it's an amazing poem, I like the topic you chose to, interesting..Keep on writting Allen!

wow that was cool, that was awesome man, nice work!
-Allen
^^the real allen
lol, jk
take it easy

wow what an awesome poem..i hope ure fine..keep up the excellent work..take care always
-mel
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i didn't know you had also disappeared from this site. This poem is breathtaking. I really enjoy when poems are written in a metaphoric view. And this was flawless! Even though i feel bad, because i read that it was from real experience. HAve you seen coal? The moment you show a little flame, the whole coal starts burning again. And looks more beautiful. Love doesn't die. Atleast the roots stay undecayed. Wait for the winter to get over... you may find new buds budding on the plant of your love.
Oops! You know that i talk a lot!
Take care,
Love, Trincy.