awww =[ i love the ending, great job! its so sad! this is definatly a 5/5, i will make sure to vote. anyways, great poem and keep up the good work ^_^
take care,
-Cheerfully Cynical

wow, i really thought you did a great job!, I understand that feeling :-/ thanks commenting on mine too!
-K

Wow... this poem was awesome... really good Kia... definitely a 5... keep up the incredible work!

xx, PorteR

ps - thx loads for the comment on my poem! =D

Wow. This was excellent! Thank you for your comment, it meant a lot. Take care always & God bless!

another awesome poem! i loved the ending.. i can relate to it too. keep it up!

vedali

I think i feel like this every day of my life!