beautiful poem....so descriptive...take care and keep writing...FIVE>>>

Wonderful poem. You certainly have a fascinating way with words...A God givien talent. You are an awesome writer. Happy New Year!

God Bless

P.S. Did you get my e-mail...I would greatly appriciate your help. Thanks

Very nice! Wonderful, even! I would read more, but right now, I'm kind of busy, and my computer is being slow. So, keep on writing! Can't wait to hear more!

~Ciao Lipton

awesome poem, great job, i love it it is so descritive great job

WOW...that was incredible, that was probaley one of the best i have read.
take care always
Scooby