by paperdoll Dec 26, 2004
category :
Life, society /
other
Summer mornings |
by pinkalias
I really liked this. The main idea was lovely and intriguing, and I love the comparison to the Jacarandas. The symbols and metaphors you used tied into the picture of a flower really created a dramatic impact on the reader, and I especially admired the lines, |
by paperdoll
I'm always so grateful when you guys comment. |
Absolutely beautiful. |
by Krete
I really appreciated this style of poetry...in particular the value & design of this one! |