Enough

by Broken Angel   Dec 27, 2004


I've had enough of this crying
I'm sick of cutting my arms to be happy
Tonights the perfect night for dying
for I know when I'm gone no one will feel crappy

Tonight i will make my last scar
I will slice down my delicate wrist
Yea I'm sorry I'm going that far
I dont think my soul can handle any more lies

Tonight my last bit of blood will fall
I will take my very last breath
You wont hear me scream h ear me call
Forever i will lay beneath the ruins

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  • 19 years ago

    by Krystle

    I agree with Incognito, that last line in the middle stanza could use a little bit of reworking, but the rest of your wonderful poem was golden. I could really feel the helplessness as I was reading it, your poem was so dark and captivating. Hang in there.
    lots of love,
    ~Krystle~ XX

  • 19 years ago

    by Incognito

    i like ur poem only thing is the last line in the middle bit was a bit long. otherwise it was great!
    *incognito*

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