No one there at all...

by bleed_me_slow   Dec 27, 2004


Everything was so silent,what a strange dream i was in...
I wonderd why i was here,so dark i didnt know where to begin..
Darkness all around,no clue where i was at,
I gave a shout to anyone,but not even an echo made it back..

As if by the dream itself the sound had been made silent.
I did not like that feeling at all,i did not like the quiet.
It was so terribly cold,i couldnt help but shake.
It was like being dropped suddenly,into a freezing lake.

Again i shouted to anyone,praying someone would hear my call.
But again ther was nothing,no one there at all...

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  • 19 years ago

    by priya

    nice one. keep it up.
    "'trueheart'"