I just had to say that I relate to this so much, it's incredible. Almost every line i understood completly, it's so strange how much I relate to this. But anyway, lovely I liked how you portrayed the girl's obsession with the thought of hurting herself as her comfort rather than her fear. The contradicting emotions you displayed detailed the object perfectly and really portrayed the suffering and turmoil hidden behind, as you compared it to, a mask. Good job

Reminds me of a broken girl i knew..Excellent expression of feelings..5/5