awww thats cute! i like it, kind of short, but you said what you needed to say. awesome job, and keep it up. have a happy new year!
Take Care,
-Cheerfully Cynical

That was an interesting poem. It actually almost seemed funny, in a way. I mean suicide isn't funny, don't get me wrong, but the girl's realization of her own death is, well, sorta kooky and funny at the same time. Good work

wow, that was really amazing!

it holds a very important message and i cant wait to read more from you!!

take care!
<3 jenny

Short and Sweet. Very nice.