by joe Dec 27, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
Walking past the frozen lake I'm reminded of the warm ocean breeze across my face |
by FireCracker
I cant wait to read more, it was awesome all in one, gr8 work on this piece and best of luck wit the ones to come, lol , u truly do have a gr8 talent, and u have excellent poetry so keep it up .. ! also, check out my poems if u get the chance but i just had to tell you how much i liked that poem .. AWESOME JOB !! |
by deadnalone
kool. its good. write part 2 quickly! lol |
by ChildofGod87
Wow... Amazing poem allen:) I so can't wait to hear more!!! Keep it up and thank you for reading my poem! Just let me know when you finish the part 2:) I'd love to read it! God Bless! |