Hey thanks for all your comments on my poems, i really like this, this is the first one i've read of yours but i will carry on reading because if they are any thing like this one they'll be great! And about the title, i normally take one or a couple of words in the poem that stand out to me and use that as the title. xx

hey thanx paula! this meanz a lot to me...and no problem any time i can comment on ur poems...i liked them! they were awesome, and thanx for the suggestions! luv alwayz knoxy

nice poem! i loved it! dude, i have no idea wat to call it but its awesome!

haha thanx katie! i luv ur poemz too! keep on writing! luv alwayz knoxy!

Great poem i just wrote two more comment on them if u can this one was really good u have talent thanx's for commenting on all my poems.

hey thanx echo..meanz a lot to me...i will try to comment on ur new ones ttyl bye, luv alwayz knoxy , take care

awesome poem, thanks for reviewing, titles confuse me so yeah...great work!
-Erica

haha thanx erica! luv alwayz knoxy! they sumtimes confuse me too lol...take care

hey sweetie...
that was such an awesome poem... damm! keep up the great work.. and sorry but i cant help you with the title either.. just go with what you have now because its the poem itself that really stands out.. i love it.. thanks for commenting on mine take care girly!!
lots love~

aww thanx galina and edina! luv alwayz knoxy! take care!

hey thanx pearl and miranda, this meanz a lot to me, thanx for the comments and the suggestions! luv alwayz knoxy!

hey thanx chelsea, this meanz a lot to me, keep on writing! luv alwayz knoxy!

hey thanx baby gurl! no problem any time i can comment, cuz i know how good it makez ppl feel! and thanx for commenting and the suggestion on mine! it meanz so much! luv alwayz knoxy, take care hun!

hey thanx fadedsmokerings...i can comment any time, and thanx for commenting back on mine, it meanz a lot to me. keep it up! luv alwayz knoxy, take care

I loike this poem.... It's really good... You keep it up...

I meant I like it... Sry I was typing 2 fasts...

haha thanx rose! lol...itz all good...thanx for commenting it meanz a lot to me...i'll return the favour! take care hun! luv alwayz knoxy

great poem, maybe for a title you could have 'one cut too deep' ummm, cant think of anything else. any way, brilliant write!

stay strong, lu -x-x-x-x-

Thank you for your comment,although i live in the united states i certainly do have a weakness for canada,i was born in toronto so i'll alway's have a little canadian in me,keep writing,your good.

Hey girl..
i will try and help you with a title,
my life's been taken,
or
I've had enough
or even the one you have now is good,
IDK, i suck with titles too.. lol
:o) -K