Shadow

by Tarikins   Dec 28, 2004


I can see into your mind, your every thought
I can feel your anger, as you remember the wars you've fought
I'm in every tear you've shed
And I'm in each drop of blood you've bled

I'm all around you, I'm in the pain you feel
I'm the wounds that wont heal
I am each fake smile you bare
I am the only one who truly cares

I am the hand you hold on to
I am the one thats all around you
I am the lies you've said
I am the voices in your head

I help you back up when you fall too far
Yet I am the one who pains your scar
I am the one who helps you forget
The things you've done that you regret

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  • 19 years ago

    by Shadowed_Thoughts

    yea i agree great job keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    I really liked this. I love the title tied in with the piece. After reading the poem, the title really pulls it all together and creates a different outlook on the writing. i love how you detailed the irony and used metaphors and symbols to portray the subject. I especially admired the lines,
    "I'm in every tear you've shed
    And I'm in each drop of blood you've bled"
    I really like those lines, it reallu shows the importance and pain of the subject and brings understanding to the reader. Well done

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