woo u go girl...lol...so proud to hear these things...woohoo God bless.loves. |
by Matthew Lee
Hey i like this. It shows determination to do what u want to do in life. We all need to have the same attitude in life. Very good. It's a little short. Haha just kidding. Can't wait till it's finished. |
oh sweetheart, thank you so much for the beautiful lil comment... u touched my heart... and i think i am okay... just a lil feared for living right now but thank you for caring... love you a lot girl. God bless. |
by Tiny Reader
thats really inspiring and has given me a great idea for a new poem!don't know if it'll come out any good but i'll try!!well done again hun xx |
by Bizarre
wow that's really good! it's like u want ppl to be proud of themselves and want them to think they can do anything, right? {lol} anyways, good job! |
Its a beautiful poem, wonderful words and a deep and very sweet meaning. Excellent work. |
by Cassandra
wow I LOVE this poem plz check out mine'~ |
by confusion
really good poem, luved the powerfull message. really determined. great job! keep it up and take care, lu -x-x-x- |
by Scaleeski
THAT WAS AWESOME..Holy Crap |
by Jason
Great poem!! That is a great attitude at life and i think that it is a very inspirational poem!!! thanks for your comments and keep writing!!!! =) |
gr8 poem!! keep it up!! and thanxx for u comment it really mean a lot to meee..... |
by EpithetPoet
Hehe very optimistic and motivating. Nice work. |