by Erica Brown© Dec 28, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I watch you sleep, |
by Nici
This poem could do with a little work on it, but the ideas are brill! |
by BrokenMisery
another interesting poem, the topic is well chosen, again, the rhyming is throwing me off a bit, but its still really well done, |
by bucky
nice ideas i like them but i think u can work on this one and make it better than it is but it is good work i like it |