wooow Great poem lovely. Amazing work... loved the rhymes, it flowed well too. This is probably one of your best =) Great job hunnie...hope everything is alright with you xxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

I liked it. You really potrayed your emotion in a dramatic effect and used symbols such as chains to commence an understanding to the reader. good job
One thing though....the poem should be called FURY, thats the emotion i'm pretty sure your trying to describe. FURRY means like you know an animal...hairy...lol thought you should know

this is great. its real, i can tell u meant everythin. and i hope your ok. im here to talk if u need to ok. luv yas take care and stay strong
Emily