by Elizabeth Ann Dec 28, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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by Amilo
I've never been into religion either.. this little "prayer" is more like the standard poem than any of your other works.. although that's not what makes it better or worse - again, the depth of meaning is excellent, and its shortness was one factor that contributed to that. |
I think god would have forgiven, lol, I'm not religious eaither, but nice work. |
by Danielle
Interesting, so short yet so meaningful...loved it |
I'm sure we all sometimes surprise ourselves *smiles*. |
by FTS Miles
Simple, effective, and to the point. |