awesome poem, i especially liked the first stanza, nice work & 5/5 =)

nice poem. . .i really like it ,sorry for that guy i hope u find ur special guy soon. bye take care!

Aww... great poem girl, most definatly LOVE it. To be truthful tho, I've read many like it. Still, it's a great pem, keep it up!
-Cheerfully Cynical

What is it with this killer of time guy and spitting on people's work?!? Does he like ANYONE'S poetry but his own?! I have yet to see anyone get a good review from him, though he's handed out so many. *Mutters "calm, calm, breathe"* Anyway, I'm also not into love poems, but I thought this was quite touching and beautiful. Keep up the good work.

The first stanza of this poem really caught my attention and the rest was just as great.

Keep writing.

Nici.

i thought your poem was abousloutly amazing...truly loved it...definatly summed up the heart break of loosing a guy you love...i hope your okay?!
keep up the good writing
love 3oe(lexi)
x x

Awwwww...great job writing this poem keep it up

nice poem

I cant keep dwelling on this,
but I don’t want to let go.
It’s way to hard to say goodbye
because he had me from hello.

thats my fav part!!!
don't stop writing