please say so i u like it or not. i didn't really wanted to post it, but thought it was worth a try.
truehearth

you want the truth...i dont like it...it provokes such negativity on life when u could get more into the better things in life....but i want to check out more of ur poems so i am not judging you on this one...God bless.

thanks for being honest with me. like i said in my commenti didn't really like it but i just wanted to try it. so again, thanks.
later

This is good poem, But I do agree with heather, and I to am going to check out more of ur poems

well speaking truly it made me feel very angry...not at u or anyone else...just mad for no reason...this poem isnt the kind of poems im into but 4 every person that doesnt like a poem theres another that does...keep writing...!Bye!