Sweet Revenge

by Unseen Exposure   Dec 29, 2004



"Get down on your knees
Worthless creature of the night
You are nothing, nothing, nothing ...
Just a hideous, pitiful sight"

I cannot look you in the eyes
Those words hit me much too hard
I cannot stand on my own
I'm just your "insignificant shard"

Your touch makes me grow cold
You make my tender soul go numb
Comfortably shattered in pieces
I have already succumb

What is it I'm worth to you?
Am I more than just your mistress?
Your unworthy eager infection
A broken face you cannot miss?

"Do not stand up to me
Don't look your sad eyes into mine
Back away in the shadows"
.. I feel your tenderness decline

To you, I'm just some animal
Some scrap from off the street
But beware, I bid you master..
Revenge on you is sweet.

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  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    I really like how you portrayed the feeling of submission and lowliness that a guy can make a girl feel. You described that emotion perfectly, adn I really liked the ending,
    "But beware, I bid you master..
    Revenge on you is sweet."
    I absolutly love those lines. They give some hope and inspiration for a gain of power and dignity back to the victim, not to mention the build up of pain to acknowledge how sweet revenge would be. good job

  • 19 years ago

    by Lipton

    OOoooohhhhh... Sounds like whatever this guy is getting will be appropriate. Great job!

    ~Ciao Lipton

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