OOoooohhhhh... Sounds like whatever this guy is getting will be appropriate. Great job!

~Ciao Lipton

I really like how you portrayed the feeling of submission and lowliness that a guy can make a girl feel. You described that emotion perfectly, adn I really liked the ending,
"But beware, I bid you master..
Revenge on you is sweet."
I absolutly love those lines. They give some hope and inspiration for a gain of power and dignity back to the victim, not to mention the build up of pain to acknowledge how sweet revenge would be. good job