Cool, but yet scary :D hehe, in many ways I can relate well to this poem, its almost like speaking from within me :) Just a personal thougth, the last line seems a bit misplaced to me... but its just me ;) The poem is great, the flow the rhyme, its perfect :) keep it up. take care.

i love it! i can totally relate to it because that's how i feel. all so fake by not telling how i truly feel to anybody, not even my parents. i specially like these lines where u said there are so many ways u can choose from just so until it kills u.
keep up the great work and thanks for your comments.
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i love it! i can totally relate to it because that's how i feel. all so fake by not telling how i truly feel to anybody, not even my parents. i specially like these lines where u said there are so many ways u can choose from just so until it kills u.
keep up the great work and thanks for your comments.
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sorry it came twice
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i loved ur comment...how can u tell me not to kill myself and u write stuff like this? *tears* plz dont shannon...talk to me if u need me... i want u here my friend...God bless you...a prayer held for you in heart.

Wow thats amazing!! i really lyked this part 'I hide my pain,It’s the best thing I can do, Always being fake, Never being true' everything you write seems so true and important!!even this is a really good talent to have, i hope that pain isnt true!!luv sarah xx

bravo! good job!