by Lushed Dec 29, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
When i was a child. |
by Incognito
Your poem makes me angry because it opens my eyes just that little bit more to all the horror of the world. But it is very well written you have done a good job, take a bow. |
and by the way, thanks sooo much for your comments I really appreciate them, sorry I write bad comments compared to the ones you write but you have AWESOME poetry =) |
awesome poem, very nicely done. I loved the entire last part, it's an excellent ending. great work! |