awesome poem, very nicely done. I loved the entire last part, it's an excellent ending. great work!

and by the way, thanks sooo much for your comments I really appreciate them, sorry I write bad comments compared to the ones you write but you have AWESOME poetry =)
-Erica

Your poem makes me angry because it opens my eyes just that little bit more to all the horror of the world. But it is very well written you have done a good job, take a bow.
-Incognito