Very amazing poem, great work, I could feel the emotion you put into it

i really like this one and thanx fo commiting on my poems
gave it a 5 keep writin

freakin awesome, i love the way it's written, it's almost like you're there, nice work hun

emma x

Este poem was all nothing but truth. Who knows maybe what we've experienced may change our lifes by writing them. Nothing but five!!!!!!!!

Wow, im like, so glad 2 c someone not taking their writing seriously. its good to see a 'funny' poem now and again, instead of all these emo ones. you're really good at taking the shit out of all those try hard homies. keep it up, gangsta. peace out playa