by FireCracker Dec 29, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Today I saw him For the first time in months |
by Hailey
Excellent Poem..Its Mirrors Me And MY Ex..Your Glad Their Happy but A Part Of u Wants Them To be Happy With Only U..Its Kinda Selfish But I Feel The Same Way..and its hurts when u love them so much and in a few months they seem to be fine with it all..great poem..great word usage and great talent..mwa mwa |
by B4BY BLU3 X
hiya its me again, dat was a reli gr8 poem, its one of da best iv seen, looks lyk u hav sum real talent der! keep it up!! o n by da way, i can relate 2 wot ur goin thro, i am goin thro da same thing, so dnt wori ur not alone, im feelin ur pain x |
by Sw33ti3
Omg that was really really good..ur really talented and thx for ur comment..keep it up..latez |
by Mustardhart
Wow!! I am speechless. Kool stuff, and splendid story in a poem. Love the swist you put in the middle, about feeling his warmth embrace. It came from no where and then suddenly you mellowed the tempo to something sad. Good write. |
by ChildofGod87
Beautiful girl... I loved it! *5/5* I know how you feel! Oh yes, I do..lol.. It wasn't pretty either! But keep on strong and God... especially the angels will guide you through & through you'll see! Still smile:) Everything would be fine you'll see! :D hehe... Wow, that sounded like a poem! Sry about that! hehe.. NEWays Keep on writing! |