Very interesting... Liked the language... It kinda kept my mind moving around, if ya know what I mean... Well, good job!

~Ciao Lipton

Good job...it was different, but good. I liked it. Keep it up and take care..

It dont matter wat section its in..its great work and i liked it..keep it up
*XoX Sw33ti3*

Nice work..

I'd say it's definitly a poem, it's very thought provoking. Keep writing, I love your work.