you don't need to improve this is great

damn girl! you are good, and im really glad my poem could inspire you to stop, but just remember, its not me who helped you , its you who helped you, cause if you didnt want to stop then my poem would mean nothing to you......keep up the good work, my emal is
imonfire06@yahoo.com

wow
i used 2 self harm and i think ive stopped but i will neva no till i die without doin it again (soz u dnt wanna no about me)
ure poem touched me
it was like you were going in my head and pulling my feelings into your poem i have tried 2 rite about my self harm please could you look and leave comments so i can find out how i can make them great like yours?
thanks
keep up the gd work
and im glad uve stopped