This piece was great:) I really liked it:) You can come up with more if you want to:) haha..good job:)
-SaRs-

I LOVE this. Your right, it's different, but i really admire it. Reading it, it was as if I was standing there expieriencing the whole thing. And, I absolutly love how you portrayed the betrayl and abuse of trust, and how much it hurt the relationship. I also love the ending, how the girl backed out no matter how much the boy pleaded because of his mistake, then takes her own life. Really portrays the emotional depth of a relationship gone bad. I really admired the quote,
"The day you walked away from me
Was the day I found the blade
Please, I am not blaming you
It was my resulting, wrongful choice
But you never cared to listen
You muted my euphonious voice"
^ I loved those lines. Excellent job

katie...this is AMAZING...please keep writing hun....
love you

excellent work!!!!

You scared me at first when you changed your name. I didn't know who you were! Anyway, this was such a great poem. Interesting format. Very creative! I hope everything works out for the best in your situation...

~Ciao Lipton

completely different style, totaly unique, nice rhyme scheme, good flow, wonderful poem in generaly. Awesome work, and why the change of name?

emma x

Excellent excellent work, the notable name change kind of threw me off a little, but its all good. I really loved this story, I had a similar conversation with an ex-boyfriend of mine the other day. Good work, keep writing!
Lots of love,
~Krystle~ XX

that was.. just... wow...