Leaving Behind Trials and Tribulations (Crimson Cries)

by ¤©h€€®ƒüll¥♥©¥ñ!c@l¤   Dec 30, 2004


As it snows it reminds me of the crimson cries
Falling to the ground like that of God’s winter tears
Erasing all the lines of wrong paths taken
And trying to delete all the scars and suffering

As I look out the sheer glass window into the backyard
I think of how good my life used to be
Now tears of sadness replace those of contentment
And I have no one to turn to for my grief

I just want to be blissful again
I want to cry clear tears instead of scarlet
I want to know what its like to frolic through meadows
And play hide-and-seek in the abundant woods again

So let this snow slide off my windowsill
Therefore I can see rays of hope and happiness
Shining to give me a cue to spread my wings
And leave all these trials and tribulations behind

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  • 19 years ago

    by Leah20

    I really like this, I can relate to it. Keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    hmm, very good. Normally I am a pretty good critiquer (sp?) when it comes to poems, but this one was hard to critique. Meh, I give up. Don't worry, I'll read more and find something ;-). I liked this poem, especially because it was descriptive and had long sentences. Sometimes people don't realize that long sentences help create a more standardized rhythm, and allow for more rhymes to be made without sounding corny (not that this poem rhymed, I was just ranting). Good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥-Sharon Ardern-♥

    i don't why this is only rated 4.0, because this is an amazing poem. please never stop writing, and please seek out a way to let the whole world read your writing. im sure any publisher would be glad to print your work. weldone, i will always be reading x x x x

  • 19 years ago

    by ¤©h€€®ƒüll¥♥©¥ñ!c@l¤

    no, i would have, beacuse its true, I see way too many plagerized poems and quotes on here. Plus, even before you sumbmit the poem the rules say that you have to be the author of the poem. Second of all, why are you leaving this comment on my poem?

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