thats really good syd.. great job. much luv

Great poem. I really like how you were able to keep the same theme throughout it without being repetative. Awesome job, keep writing.

Ann

This is a great write. I love your presentation format and your style of writing. KOOOOOOOL 5 all the way

aww wow, thats beautiful!!
God Bless
Love Heather

Hey, this is really good, keep ur head up and take care...
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy