FrOzEn

by SammiBABY   Dec 30, 2004



No warm hands reaching out,
Only icy stares.
No one to hear your noisy cries.
Because no one really cares.
No fuzzy blanket,
Just a cold, cold night.
A frozen feeling through your body,
No one will hold you tight.
No hot sun shining,
Just dark clouds of grey,
No one left to warm you up,
When your bodies freezing away.
No warm fire,
Just a body so numb.
There’s never any hope of warmth to come.
The matches all snapped,
The firewood is wet,
My warm clothes are missing,
I’m feeling things I’ll never forget.
She left me completely frozen,
In a pool of icy dust,
With no hope of warming up
and no one left to trust.

I didn’t choose for this to happen,
Has my life already been chosen?
All I did was fall in love,
Why did I end up frozen?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Always4You

    Hey that was good...I just randomly picked a person and picked a poem and it was yours...Great job!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    Really nice, the ending was the best, it was written so simply but came off very effectively.

  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Yet again anotha amazing poem.
    great work huni. keep it up.
    i love u
    nami
    xxoxoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by Fadedstar

    Aww that was sooooo good!

  • 19 years ago

    by Atahan Tolunay

    Meaningful poem about love. Good work, I like it.