Twisted angel

by Shadowed_Thoughts   Dec 30, 2004


Come and save her
save her from me
wrap her in your arms
and wipe away her tears

open her eyes
solve her problems
and make her happy
kiss away her scars

and look into her eyes
heal her broken heart
and fix her broken wings

take this twisted angel
and help her soar
don't ever let her cry again
love her and hold her
make her dreams come true

and then when she is happy
let me tell you this that twisted angel..
is really me

*needs work*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I liked the poem but something is missing maybe add to it I don't know I am not very good so I can't really give advice on how to write. I love reading poems though. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    I totally liked the idea of the poem. But you are right, something doesnt exactly click. Maybe the flow isnt that good, but im not sure. Keep on working on this poem, over all it was very good.
    SatuzKa

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