AWESOME, wow its sooo good, has an excellent meaning, VERY well written, 5/5! =)
-Erica

ok thank you so much for your comment on my poem! i just got back and it was so touching to see it! i love this poem the comarision between a shining star and people was so brillant i can only wish i had though of it! not just the idea and outline but your wording was perfection! great all around poem!
lexi lou