Wow, Lipton...I'm not really sure what to say. Although I can say that it is beautiful in its own unique way (that is by no means a bad way). Great job. If you want, tell me what this is about sometime. I'll ttyl

Very nice! I loved this poem. The way you described everything and your choice of words were just brilliant! Excellent job! =) Take care and Happy New Year!

You have drawn an intriguing contrast between the beauty of the night and the melancholy mood. I really liked the imagery you created here.
--Lydia

wow... i'm speechless. i would, however, like to know... is this how you really feel? Or did this just flow out, as if you were another person?
Talk to me sometime! haha...
*muah*

that was awesome, i suck at writing haikus. great job. LYMTAB. ciao~lyn

This is sure to tell the old year good night and welcome the new one with a smile and a prospect yester years never gave. Positive and beautiful. Take care man!!

Life seems hopeless, now.
I'm not who I thought I was.
I lift my pale face.

I make my way back,
Into judgment I now fall,
Forever, unsure...

those two stanzas really seemed to jump out at me...i know that i can relate to them and this whole poem was just amazing..great job and keep it up!