I agree with Zy those last lines of yours were truly the best! Its good you can hold on to those memories even if things didn't work out for the two of you.. And you know when things don't work out something better is coming!! Stay strong girl I know you can..Beautiful peice! Love you always,
~Chelsey~

wow this is a great poem..thatnks for the comment onmine! this poem reminds me of my boyfriend that i had..i still love him and this poem is great... 5/5

-cricket-

Aww... this poem is really sweet.... I'm headed to read more of your poems;)

CyN

so no more new ones by you so i decided to check out an older one!! hmm this is really good...Good luck with this guy!! i know how it feels...i'm sure a lot of us can relate!! and girl u need to bring on some more of those good poems lol and drop by soon!! God Bless
Love Heather.

Awsome, loved the last lines.

AWESOME!