awww, wow that was great... i so loved it!!!
that was awesome, its so hard to write poems that good that rhyme wow you really are great!!!

(Summer's Secret II is up for ya)
take care
-Allen

that is so great! very sad but very good. great work
~cort~

Gave it a 5*** all the way. This is really the funberal of the year about to pass on. Greast memory and recapitulation of a bond.
Happy new begginigng in the new year.

Aww maybeth I'm am sure he didn't foret you!! Who could? There is a little soething called puppy love and it looks like your in it Lol..I've been there before and like i have said before every ending is a new beginning..Maybe you could stay friends with him and a new guy could be on the way!!! Keep your head girl! I know ya can stay strong!
~Chelsey~

thats an amazing poem, i read it coz of your ver appreciated comment on my poem bout my bf. thats an amazing poem.
take care always,
ellie

Wow i had to read some of ur poems becuz u left a comment on mine i like this poem out of the ones ive read so far thank you for the compliment ur a very talented writer too keep up the good writing i got my icon at www.xanga.com/suicidalcuttingicons i know it sounds odd but there are alot of cute icons on there so bye bye

What a great love story. Passion just leaped from every word I read.

I really like your style. You have so much emotion in what you write.

Kind regards
Hayley