Very nice poem. I like your writing style. keep up the good work.

Aww even though this poem was written a long time ago.. its still very good! Good job! well worded! A powerful poem! keep writing :)

Wow, another interesting poem, very powerful, with a great use of words. Keep Writing :D:D
Sky

I think this poem had some good parts
the rhyming in the beginning was really good
It got a little needy for rhyming words here and there
but It was good
5/5
love kaila

Wow amazing poem, i loved it. it was soooo good. i have no compaints. 5/5

Not too bad. Not your best, though.

What don’t kill us makes us strong some one said,
[[What were you trying to say here? I believe this is a typo.]]

Anyways, not too bad. Good description and I could feel your questions. Nicely done.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

Well if your so damn just then tell me what to do?
Seems that there might be a word missing from this line, it didn't make sense to me. Other than that, and the few grammer errors, really well written, I have to agree to agree with xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Not one of your best.

While I do love the idea and actual content of this poem, the flow is a bit shaky in some parts. The last line especially needs a bit of editing, it's mainly just the flow that drags the poem down a little. Other than that, I like the poem, and I like the writing. Nice work.

Good work..powerful choice of words..n the description was perfect n the questions..thoughtthe rhyme did seem a little forced towards the end...this wok too..was good...
Kp it up!
xxPoojaxx