by Robert Dec 31, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
Close my eyes take me to a land beyond my own, |
I expected a better ending... :P but otherwise I really liked it. You can just imagine what your talking about. 5.5 |
Very intersting poem. well written, a few minor mistakes though, there=their in a few places and with out=without and the flow was shaky towards the end. It was very creative and a good read all in all. 4/5 |
Awesome..perfect n beautiful..lol...this wrk reminds me of LOR....a darl poem..neatly penned...filled wth essence of fantasy! |
by xxxStarSxxx
I really liked this one. You added darkness to fantisy and it worked out well! 5/5 |
Another wonderful poem. |