Thanks for your comment. My writing is a different style, i'm gonna continue with that but thanks for your advise. Your poems are good. Good job. Keep writing, it sounds like you have a good look on poetry, that's really good. Greatly written.

Great poem :D I liked this part
"to hear the songs of elves and dwarfs digging under ground"
lol it reminds me of Lord of the Rings, I really like this poem, they are great! Keep writing~!
SkY

Another wonderful poem.
I really like your style of writing.
Free handed pretty much your own
thing but still rhymes and flows
beautiful. Thank you for the comments
and rates. God Bless 5/5
<3tay(^_^)

I really liked this one. You added darkness to fantisy and it worked out well! 5/5
~Steff

Awesome..perfect n beautiful..lol...this wrk reminds me of LOR....a darl poem..neatly penned...filled wth essence of fantasy!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Very intersting poem. well written, a few minor mistakes though, there=their in a few places and with out=without and the flow was shaky towards the end. It was very creative and a good read all in all. 4/5

I expected a better ending... :P but otherwise I really liked it. You can just imagine what your talking about. 5.5