Comments : Shards of a Photograph

  • 19 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    oh, i got it, i got it, split the last line of the second stanza from the rest of the verse, and let it stand on it's own! other than that (me being picky) it's really really good jemma.

    emma x

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Really liked this poem. Excellent job! =) Thank you for your comment! Sorry I haven't been able to comment back sooner. Anyway, take care and happy new year!

    -Grace

    `x I'll Never Regret These Years `x