oh, i got it, i got it, split the last line of the second stanza from the rest of the verse, and let it stand on it's own! other than that (me being picky) it's really really good jemma. |
by Gracie Jo
Really liked this poem. Excellent job! =) Thank you for your comment! Sorry I haven't been able to comment back sooner. Anyway, take care and happy new year! |