The PoeM of QuestionS

by yolande the dreamer   Dec 31, 2004


I am in my world of death
will no one hear my tears?
in my doubt I lie tonight
Can i hide my fears?

Will the dream that haunts my mind
Stay here till kingdom comes?
Or will it go throughout the night
Back to where it belongs?

Can you see the rain thats pouring
On my my hands, my face like tears?
Will you listen to my sobs
And silence what i hear?

The questions here are without end
The world is too complex
many of these my love can't answer
The answers are just too mixed

So now should i just stay relaxed
Just stay real calm and quiet?
I will just stay here out of sight
waiting silently to be noticed

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  • 19 years ago

    by spunk

    wow that was really good, i love the dark/sadness feeling that you have caputured in the readers mind. it makes me think alot about things when reading it, i love it, eachtime when i read it i get a different feeling. and there has only been a few poems that have been able to do that to me and that poem was a ver good one, keep up the good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Conner

    Being completely honest, that REALLY is the best poem I've read on this site so far. I just don't see how anyone hasn't voted on it much. I absolutely love it though. Awesome job!! I'd give it the highest rating anytime. Take care!
    -Conner

  • 19 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure

    Very good poem. I thought it was well written, and the message was excellent. Great job!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Look At Me

    no you're not bad at all yolande you are awsome!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by yolande the dreamer

    am i that bad?

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