oh hunnie, don't say that! I bet you're a gorgeous young lady! You don't deserve that at all! you're an amazing girl, with loads n loads of talent, you don't deserve any of your pain and hurt...i hope you se ethat hun...amazing work...fllowed well...hope you're alright baby <3 xxxxxxx always here for u |
by SuicideQueen
i really felt your pain at the end, but hunni no matter how deep you cut u cant kill whats inside! cuts just dont do that you have to believe in yourself screw what other people think!! keep smiling xxx |
by Knoxy
this is awesome, and if this is true, ur still beautiful! everybody's got their strong points and weak points, just be urself! itz worth it, take care, alwayz here for ya, luv alwayz knoxy |
by Shædow Poet
Aw... :( I hope you really don't feel that way!!! That it just so sad. But this is true- looks wont take you anywhere in this world! You definetely have the talent :) So keep writing... |
by Katie
this whole poems deals with me..every single word! keep on writing!! |
*tear* wow that made tears form my eyes. i would say beauty is on the inside but seems like that never would help you but i am sure u r not ugly!! b/c thru ur words r u already beautiful to me God Bless. |
by kristen
hey i dont know you but hun you have to love your self before anyone else can |
i can so relate to this poem, i love it. keep writing you rock |
by confusion
i know i dont know you, but iv always been told there are no ugly people, and i agree with that, different people may be better looking than others, but none ugly. fatastic poem, youve got a great talent. |
by Marta
wow! that was such a sad, heart-jerking poem! i can't even put into words how good that was, you are an amazing writer, keep on writing hun. |
i love this poem, i can relate to it |
by Mass Murder
wow........ |
It's like you wrote this poem with my words, I know exactly how you are feeling...I hear your pain. Great poem, though it's so sad.... |