Insane!

by Jennifer Fox or Jackson   Jan 1, 2005


Broken windows
smashed from the past
shattering glass
breaking so fast.

Darkness is covering
all that eyes can see
my heart is pounding
uncontrollably......

Hold me now
I feel so cold
empty inside
a story untold.

Eyes jet red
scared and alone
whole body shaking
all on its own.

Whispering sounds
only I can hear
the voices tell me
to live in fear.

Haunting dreams
always through the night
woken in tears
goosebumps of fright.

Why is it me
always so scared
I've done nothing wrong
I've always cared.

Please don't hurt me
I want no more pain
I feel so weak
my heart feels drained.

No more pretending
that everythings ok
my head keeps spinning
and I'm feeling insane.

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Thank-you...Jen!

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  • 19 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Wow! This poem is excellent. The short lines make it flow really well.
    Great job!

    Tiffany.xox.

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    That was absolutely amazing! I love dark poems and this one was exellent. It flowed perfectly! One of the better ones that I have read in along time! No advice on this one it was perfect!~Brooke~

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    This poem had my attention throughout. It flowed so well and you described your feelings perfectly. It was easy to read and truly enjoyable...though a little sad. Hate to see people "feeling isane" :)

    Excellent write! 5/5 :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Erica Brown©

    Sweeet. I really like this one. I give you the award of one of the best Erica has seen in days! You just made my day! Thanks! And great job!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Abep

    wow, well what can i say im speechless, but i will say this, greatly written and awesome job! PLEASE COMMENT N VOTE ON MY POEMS!!

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