WoW... I KnOw HoW ThAt Is!!! :) GrEaT JoB oN tHe PoEm:p.. *5/5* KeEp It uP! I wRoTe SoMe NeW pOeMs PlZ cOmE aNd SeE tHeM iF yOu WaNt ThAt Is!!! ... :DGoD bLeSs!

~!~Sweet Angel Bliss Sedusha~!~
*ChEeRs 2005*

I thought the comparison you drew in this poem was very creative and well expressed. Good work.

One minor flaw at line 16:
games > should be *game's* or *game is.* I think the latter would be preferable but it is your call.

wicked! i loved it, great job jemma, fabulous!

emma x