I can relate to this poem. I hate that deep unrelenting love that forces you to think of him every second of conciousness. Its that thought in the back of your head that won't leave you alone. I have to say I love your style and your choice of topic. I wish I had half your talent.

hiya nice poem very nicely written i lyk da way u described evryting nicely. thx 4 commentin on my poem "of all da guys" n u sed "of all da guys dats bn in my lyf ur da 1 i wnt stab wit a knife" sounds abit weird, wel der is a meanin bhind it, i once threatned a boi wit a knife cuz he tried breakin into ma house wen i didnt let him in lol. so now u kno x

hey thanks for the comment on my poem. great job on this poem i like it you write very well i put you in my favs great job again i like this poem a lot i hope to read more poems
take care
-bobby-