WOW!! thats really awesome! you really have a great talent! religous or not this piece can really speak to all people

Such wonderfully fascinating personas dance through these immortal halls of mind. Beautifully worded and conceived, as always... human and alien woven into a tapestry that remains familiar while haunted.

Powerful, genius, i love it. Again, more driven text into such dark and raging parallels to uncommon words telling a s tory of emotion and true intensions. I loved how you wrote this, every line full of excellent metaphors beautifully written and adding powerful effects to the piece. You use your symbols in such a lovely way that portrays the story and creates an understanding of the beauty of it. Your main idea I thouht was just wisely thought out. I love the desire of power you portrayed and the comparisons to a student striving for it. Excellen, EXCELLENT, very well written.

Beautiful poem. I admire your writing.

Your work is so different from anything else I've read - some of it confuses me and I find it difficult to plow through it, but all of it breathes with beauty and uniqueness.

This one in particular was breathtaking. So full of dark, mystical emotion woven within it... and it's almost like a short story, or a short excerpt of something rather than a poem - but either way, excellent work.

..and thank you for your kind comments on my poems.

Very different from what I've been reading. I love it. Excellent work! rate and comment. >3jess

bravo i must say...wow you're really talented, i loved it

I loved the last line... This poem has a deep, dark eirey effect to it and still is an easy read Brilliant write you reli do have a talent Plz r/c on some of mine and if u like my work add me to ur favs xx

That was awsome! it was complex, but in the way that makes you curious enough to think about it. i like olden days, sword & sheild kinda stuff, so i was happy to see something like this. i loved it! 5/5

Hey this poem is awesome.. i simply loved the way it worked so perfectlyyyy....its perfectly fluent..
keep it up :)
great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5