I dedicate my life to you

by Idiosyncratic   Jan 2, 2005


I dedicate my life to you
And all the pain it brings
The feeling of no freedom
An angel without wings

I dedicate my life to you
In hopes you'll share it's sorrow
With it you will have so little
No promise of tomorrow

I dedicate my life to you
Drown in self remorse
Deep inside your own regret
That will not take its course

Yes, I dedicate my life to you
For it will end quite soon
I do not care if you can't control it
It sings to it's own tune

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kris Lynn

    Awesome. I can describe it as just that. Awesome. Keep it up.

    ~*~Christina~*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Erica Brown©

    Very sweet I enjoy your rhyme shceme and how it is written. Well written! Great job keep it up.

  • 19 years ago

    by Felicia Tursi

    I love it so much! Especially the part "an angel without wings"! 5/5 TOTALLY!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lushed

    wow. i absolutly fall in love with all of your poems! theyre so wonderful!!
    i love how it's really quite ambigous.. cant wait to continue my stalking you. haha, i like, read all your poems! theyre so good!

  • 19 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    sorry, im being evil (and commenting on my own poem numerous times), thank you for reviewing, =)

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